The table shows independent film releases by genre in the UK and Republic of Ireland in 2012.
The graph above illustrates
number
of releases and the Change the article
a number
the number
income
of the independent films released by different genre
in the UK and Ireland in 2012.
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genres
Overall
, the total films released in 2012 were 148. It can be clearly seen that overall
drama and documentary had the most number of releases whilst biopic is the least of all.
Each documentary and drama presented 35 movies, yet their income
from ticket sales was pretty different. While
drama made 8.3%, documentary only made to
2.9%. Comedy, Correct pronoun usage
it to
however
, scored the highest percentage of income
at 45.4% even though the amount of comedy being put on the market only
26 films per year. Horror and Add a missing verb
is only
thriller
released slightly the same amount in a year at about 14. Fix the agreement mistake
thrillers
However
, their income
was imbalance because while
horror got 20.2%, thriller scored very low sales at 1.3%
Romance and action also
brought the same amount at around 5. While
romance made the least income
among all, action movies received 4.1% from cinema ticket
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tickets
Moreover
, biopic
genre only launched 1 movie at that time but the transaction is not Correct article usage
the biopic
dissapointing
at 9.1%.Correct your spelling
disappointing
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