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The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie graphs illustrate the result of a survey of girls' and
boys
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' cultural and leisure activities.
Overall
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, both genders enjoyed listening to music and playing
computer
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games
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, females
also
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 enjoyed reading,
whereas
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 males were not passionate about it. 
Boys
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 spend
their
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the
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 majority of
spare
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their spare
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time
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on
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apply
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playing
computer
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games
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(34 per
cent
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participation
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rate
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), after
computer
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games
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 second most popular activity for
boys
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 is basketball(26 per
cent
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participation
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rate
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),
boys
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also
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 like playing soccer, skateboarding and listening to music. The lowest
rate
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 had reading only 2 per
cent
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 of them spend their free
time
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to read
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reading
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 books. Girls spend
their
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the
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 majority of
leisure
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their leisure
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time
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 on dancing(27 per
cent
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participation
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rate
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),
reading
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and reading
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 comes as the second most popular leisure(21 per
cent
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), despite dancing and reading girls spend their
time
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on
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apply
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playing
computer
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games
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(16 per
cent
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), netball(15 per
cent
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) and gymnastics(11 per
cent
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). Listening to music was the lowest
rate
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 compared to other activities its
participation
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rate
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 was only 10 per
cent
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, computer, games, time, cent, participation, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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