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Some people believe that a good training course can prepare anyone to become a good teacher. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some individuals think that in preparation to become a good teacher, a good training
course
 would suffice. I believe
this
 profession requires beyond a training
course
,
such
 as experience, motivation, passion and so on to fully become a good educator. In
this
 essay, I will discuss
further
 why I support
this
 view and reach a conclusion. Joining a
course
 that
teach
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teaches
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 teachers
on
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how
educate
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students
, will give them knowledge on how to manage the classroom, how to modify their techniques, identify different methods of teaching, and so on.
This
 is a good foundation
to deliver
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for delivering
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 lessons to
students
 effectively.
However
, these training courses will not teach teachers
on
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how to motivate and inspire
students
, or even how to handle various
students
 and
pressure
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 of teaching. These are qualities that require more than just training, but experience, intuition, dedication, and personality.
Moreover
, a training
course
 cannot teach everyone to love teaching. Teaching is not just a job, but a profession
that is
 demanding, and could not be done properly without commitment and
enthusiam
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enthusiasm
.
This
 is because they have a lot of responsibilities, even outside the classroom, including meeting the parents of
students
, organising lesson plans,
grading
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 papers. They
also
 cope
up
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with emotional and psychological challenges
due to
handing
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handling
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 difficult
students
, managing stress, finding satisfaction, or maintaining motivation. These challenges may affect the quality and effectiveness of their teaching and cannot be overcome by a training
course
. In conclusion, teaching is a complex and demanding profession that could not be tackled by a training
course
, because it requires skills, talent and passion.
This
course
 may provide basic tools and knowledge on how to teach, but it cannot guarantee the success of having happier teachers.
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