The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.
The pie charts above illustrate different
types
of Use synonyms
energy
in France in 1995 and 2005. Use synonyms
Overall
, the percentage of Linking Words
gas
, coal, nuclear , and other all increased marginally, Use synonyms
in contrast
, there was a remarkable downward trend in Linking Words
petrol
and. Use synonyms
While
the amount of Linking Words
gas
was the largest, other Use synonyms
types
of Use synonyms
energy
that were not Use synonyms
gas
, coal, Use synonyms
petrol
, Use synonyms
nuclear
showed the lowest.
In 1995, the largest percentage belonged to Correct word choice
and nuclear
gas
with the number of 29.63%, meanwhile, the amount of Use synonyms
petrol
power was Use synonyms
the
modest compared to Correct article usage
apply
gas
and coal, which was 29.27%. After 10 years, with Use synonyms
a
greater growth, coal showed the largest amount Remove the article
apply
in
all 5 Change preposition
of
types
of Use synonyms
energy
, which was 30.93% Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
gas
ended up in second place with the number of 30.31%. Only Use synonyms
petrol
Use synonyms
energy
witnessed a significant decrease of about 10%.
In the 10-year period, both nuclear power and other Use synonyms
energy
Use synonyms
types
experienced an upward trend. In 1995, 6.40% of the Use synonyms
energy
in France was nuclear Use synonyms
while
the other Linking Words
energy
production stood at 4.90%. In 2005, the percentage of nuclear power finished Use synonyms
with
10.10%, which was 1% more than other Change preposition
at
energy
production.Use synonyms
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