You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentage of Australian men in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014.
The given bar chart delineates the information about the percentage of Australian
male
of three distinct Fix the agreement mistake
males
age
group
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groups
that is
15 to 19, 35-44 and 60-64, who are employed in three different years that are 1984, 2001 and 2014. Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that men of the age
from 35 to 44 ae
more employed Correct your spelling
are
in
each year, as compared to other Change preposition
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age
differences.
In 1984, only 62.5 peecent
of men Correct your spelling
per cent
with
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the
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age
15 to 19 Replace the word
aged
are
employed, Wrong verb form
were
while
this
value remains
in parallel during 2001. Wrong verb form
remained
However
, in 2014, working individuals from the age
of 15-19 declined and this
accounts for only 50%.
Men from the age
of 35 to 44 are identical in all the
three years Correct article usage
apply
that is
1984, 2001 and 2014, which accounts for about 95%. The percentage of people from the age
60 to 64, were similar during the year of
1984 and 2001, which is about 40%. Somehow, Change preposition
apply
this
number got
increased to 60% in 2014.Verb problem
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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