You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentage of Australian men in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014.
The given bar chart delineates the information about the percentage of Australian
male
of three distinct Fix the agreement mistake
males
age
Use synonyms
group
, Fix the agreement mistake
groups
that is
15 to 19, 35-44 and 60-64, who are employed in three different years that are 1984, 2001 and 2014. Looking from an Linking Words
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that men of the Linking Words
age
from 35 to 44 Use synonyms
ae
more employed Correct your spelling
are
in
each year, as compared to other Change preposition
apply
age
differences.
In 1984, only 62.5 Use synonyms
peecent
of men Correct your spelling
per cent
with
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
Use synonyms
age
15 to 19 Replace the word
aged
are
employed, Wrong verb form
were
while
Linking Words
this
value Linking Words
remains
in parallel during 2001. Wrong verb form
remained
However
, in 2014, working individuals from the Linking Words
age
of 15-19 declined and Use synonyms
this
accounts for only 50%.
Men from the Linking Words
age
of 35 to 44 are identical in all Use synonyms
the
three years Correct article usage
apply
that is
1984, 2001 and 2014, which accounts for about 95%. The percentage of people from the Linking Words
age
60 to 64, were similar during the year Use synonyms
of
1984 and 2001, which is about 40%. Somehow, Change preposition
apply
this
number Linking Words
got
increased to 60% in 2014.Verb problem
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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