The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Frequency of eating at fast food restaurants among people in the USA (2003-2013) 40% 35% 30% 25% 20% 15% 10% 5% 0% Every day Several times a week Once a week Once or twice a month A few times a year Never 2003 2006 У 2013
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The given image depicts
bar
chart representing the trends in Correct article usage
a bar
consumption
of fast Correct article usage
the consumption
food
in the USA between 2003 and 2013.
To begin
with, most people
consume their fast food
in once a week between 2003 and 2013. While
2013 they Change preposition
In
change
their habits Wrong verb form
changed
as taken
once or twice a month. Change preposition
to taking
Whereas
, lower
number of society Correct article usage
a lower
taken
every day fast Wrong verb form
took
food
between 2003 and 2013.
Moreover
, in 2016 and 2013 equal amount of people
consumed their street foods at 15%. At
the same year, they had a lower amount of snacks in Change preposition
In
everyday
and some Replace the word
every day
are
never consumed. Remarkably, in 2003, Wrong verb form
were
people
Change noun form
people's
consumed
level had Replace the word
consumption
been
increased consistently, Unnecessary verb
apply
while
they taken
more fast Wrong verb form
had eaten
food
in
once a week. Change preposition
apply
However
, in 2013, more people
reduced their consumption level while
had
once or twice a month at approximately 32%.Wrong verb form
having
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