WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given line graphs illustrate 4 verities of electronic devices which
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used in households within 20 years from 1995.
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increase
usage
of all four devices. Add an article
the usage
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when comparing the Correct your spelling
Despite
usage
of mobile phones and computers with the usage
of MP3 Players there was a fast acceleration. Mobile phones
and Fix the agreement mistake
phone
computers
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computer
usage
has increased up to 70% and 60% within 5 years from 1995. But from 2000 to 2015 there was a genral increasment
of 25% in Correct your spelling
general increase
usage
of mobile phones and from 2005 to 2015 again there was a 35% of acceleration in Correct article usage
the usage
usage
of computers.
The percentage of Add an article
the usage
using
PM3 Players has a 26% Verb problem
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genral increasment
starting from 15% up to 41% Correct your spelling
general increase
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between 1995 to 2015.
The percentage of using tablets Change preposition
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the middle
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of 2002 and again there was a 55% of Correct article usage
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increasment
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the middle
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of 2007 to 2010. And by 2015 the Correct article usage
the middle
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of tables has gone up to 80%.Submitted by thiliniranatunga1994 on
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