Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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Chorleywood
village
which is located near to the main city London has shown a considerable rise of
their population because of the development which happened between the Change preposition
in
year
Fix the agreement mistake
years
of
1868 and 1994.
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apply
Overall
it is clear that
,when the transportation ways were established, new village
areas were developed around it.
To begin
with,before the development era ,Chorleywood was a small village
had
only the main Correct pronoun usage
that had
road
, park, golf course and less residential area.The area which
located left side Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
the golf course and right to the main Change preposition
of
road
was developed between 1868 and 1883.Furthermore
, a new railway which crossed the southern part of the main road
was built in 1909 and the community has
increased considerably around the station and the southern part of the Unnecessary verb
apply
village
during the next 60 years.
Moreover
,the development of the east side of the village
was started in 1970 after the opening of a new motorway which crossed the main road
from the north and the railway from the south.Also
during the period of 1970 to 1994, new village
areas were developed at
Change preposition
on
the
both Remove the article
apply
side
of the motorway.Fix the agreement mistake
sides
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