The pie chart shows the number of people who were using different languages online. The table shows the average number of people online each year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie diagram depicts the population in different online languages in 2001
while
the table chart gives
the number of people who Verb problem
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the internet
internet
each year between 1997 and 2001. Briefly, English was the most popular Capitalize word
Internet
languge
in the online world, Correct your spelling
language
moreover
the trend of users Add a comma
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incresed
over the period.
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english
users were the highest number which structure stayed at 43% Change the capitalization
English
while
the japanese
chinese and Change the capitalization
Japanese
german
which were at 8.9%, 8.8%, and 6.8%, respectively. Capitalize word
German
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, the other was below 10%.
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along the way from 76 in 1997 and reached out to 513 in 2001.Wrong verb form
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