The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.
The graph compares the number of pupils majoring in Computer Science at a college in England from 2010 to 2012.
Overall
, the vast majority of local students were female, whilst most of the international ones were male during the given time. Moreover
, the total number of British home pupils were
superior to that of foreign ones.
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Initially
, according to
the information shown in the bar chart that British men studied
Correct pronoun usage
who studied
in
Computer Science at Change preposition
apply
this
university were much more than male foreigners who had the same major in 2001, which
the former were around 40 people and the latter Correct pronoun usage
apply
were
only 20 people. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, the gap shrunk to under 5 students from
2011 Change preposition
in
although
male home ones were still the main trend. At the other end of the spectrum, women studying Computer Science abroad in this
UK university were inferior to their local female classmates during
2010 to 2012. Their figures were never above 20 Change preposition
from
while
home female students were generally more than 30 women in the given time.Submitted by s99104032 on
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