The given bar chart shows the difference of the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian cities between 2001 and 2006.
The graph compares the proportions of foreign students graduating from colleges in eight different cities in Canada between 2001 and 2006.
Overall
, the vast majority of international graduates graduated in 2006, whilst people studied
abroad in Canada and had their graduations in 2001 were much less no matter in which city.
Correct pronoun usage
who studied
Initially
, according to
the information shown in the bar chart that
most international pupils graduated from colleges in New Brunswick Correct pronoun usage
apply
which
the percentage was around 7% in 2001 and 12% in 2006. Correct pronoun usage
apply
By contrast
, the figure for graduates of universities in Ontario was the fewest
in 2001 with only 3%, Correct word choice
lowest
while
, in 2006, the region which has the lowest number of graduates was Alberta with 4%. What should be particularly mentioned was
that the share of students increased from 2001 to 2006 in all the cities except for Alberta.
Wrong verb form
is
To sum up
, it can be apparently seen that the popularity of studying in Canada for foreigners raised
Wrong verb form
has risen
due to
the significant growth in the given time.Submitted by s99104032 on
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