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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
#energy #electricity
How
geothermal
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the geothermal
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 power plan
used
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 to produce
electricity
illustrated
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 in the diagram.
Overall
it is clear that
,
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 there are five stages in the production of
electricity
,
while
 the main element is cold
water
. The first stage
in
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 when the cold
water
 pump
almost
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is almost
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 five
kilometer
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kilometers
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 down to the ground and
thoughout
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throughout
 the procession of injection. After the process has been perfectly, the
water
 stream
down
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 to
geothermal
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a geothermal
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 zone that
have
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has
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 hot rocks. The flow
turn
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turns
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 to
be
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hot
water
 and
bring
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brings
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 to pump up for more process. In
this
 following stage, the H2O
put
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 into a rectangle for
steam
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the steam
a steam
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 procedure. After
have
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it has
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 been done, the material mixed in a tub called
turbine
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the turbine
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move
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moves
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 with the power of steam and
transferred
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is transferred
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 to
generator
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the generator
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. In
this
 step,
generator
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the generator
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 process with the
helps
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help
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 of
turbine
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a turbine
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 and
electricity
 that has been produced. The final stage is when
generator
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the generator
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send
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sends
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 the
electricity
 to the tower
for
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to
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 make it
works
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work
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • generate electricity
  • diagram
  • volcano
  • magma reservoirs
  • deep underground
  • heat
  • steam
  • geothermal plant
  • turbine
  • condensed
  • pumped back
  • underground reservoirs
  • transmitted
  • power grid
  • distribution
  • continuous
  • renewable
  • volcanic activity
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