The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water.

The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water.
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The diagram shows the process involved in the construction of a
water
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filter
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and how clean
water
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is obtained for human consumption. The
filter
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is made up of a plastic barrel covered by a lid which is elevated above ground by some parts.
This
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filter
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is connected to a drum by a tube to a storage that contains the clean
water
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. Inside
of
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the
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filter
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filter,
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there are 4 different layers, the first layer is filled with unclean
water
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that comes from a bottle, the second one with sand and the remaining two with charcoal and gravel. These materials help purify
water
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by removing any particles that are hazardous for drinking purposes.
Then
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, after the
water
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is cleaned, it flows back from the
filter
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to a storage unit.
Finally
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, the clean
water
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is now available for drinking.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, filter with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • gravel
  • sand
  • activated charcoal
  • particulates
  • contaminants
  • debris
  • impurities
  • sequentially
  • absorbs odors
  • improves taste
  • clean container
  • reservoir
  • gravity
  • filtration layers
  • cylindrical
  • collected
  • drinking water
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