The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information bt selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040.

Summarize the information bt selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The given graph shows actual data
of
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the city's density by the share of
overall
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the overall
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population in 4 Asian countries
during
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from
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1970 to 2020 and the forecasted information for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, the described countries began with less than 40% of their populace
that lived
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in cities as of 1970. These 4 Asian states performed an increasing trend over 50 years with the highest growth presented by Malaysia and Indonesia in 2020. Starting from 1970 as the base year, Indonesia became the least populated metropolitan
while
the Philippines got the highest number of citizens from the total population. In 2000, the proportion of Indonesia's urban inhabitants from its entire community surpassed Thailand and
Philippines
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in 2020,
whereas
Malaysia commenced its consistent growth by 2000 until 2020.
According to
the prediction, these positions will
be fluctuating
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until the next 70 years,
where
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when
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Malaysia's citizens are projected to reach nearly 90% of its national residents though the lowest share of
city's
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the city's
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residents from
nationwide
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the nationwide
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census would likely happen in Thailand.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • population density
  • trend
  • percentage
  • urban population
  • actual data
  • predictions
  • steady increase
  • striking difference
  • projection
  • fluctuation
  • contributing factors
  • demographic changes
  • socio-economic development
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