The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information bt selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The given graph shows actual data
of
the city's density by the share of Change preposition
on
overall
population in 4 Asian countries Add an article
the overall
during
1970 to 2020 and the forecasted information for 2030 and 2040.
Change preposition
from
Overall
, the described countries began with less than 40% of their populace that lived
in cities as of 1970. These 4 Asian states performed an increasing trend over 50 years with the highest growth presented by Malaysia and Indonesia in 2020.
Starting from 1970 as the base year, Indonesia became the least populated metropolitan Wrong verb form
living
while
the Philippines got the highest number of citizens from the total population. In 2000, the proportion of Indonesia's urban inhabitants from its entire community surpassed Thailand and Philippines
in 2020, Correct article usage
the Philippines
whereas
Malaysia commenced its consistent growth by 2000 until 2020.
According to
the prediction, these positions will be fluctuating
until the next 70 years, Wrong verb form
fluctuate
where
Malaysia's citizens are projected to reach nearly 90% of its national residents though the lowest share of Correct word choice
when
city's
residents from Correct article usage
the city's
nationwide
census would likely happen in Thailand.Correct article usage
the nationwide
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