You recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter introduce yourself and say when the incident happened describe what you saw and heard say what you would like the bus company to do about it

Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the local Bus driver.
To begin
with ,I am Vikram Kallem working as a Software Engineer at Cibc Bank.
Everyday
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I use my own vehicle to commute to
workplace
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.
Unfortunaley
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Unfortunately
,my car gave me trouble on 2nd
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.So,I have
choosen
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chosen
Bus to commute. The Bus driver's behaviour and his
drivnig
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driving
skills made me panic .I witnessed that he missed many stops where passengers
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to get down and he
also
applied sudden brakes that made old citizens nervous.
Additonally
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Additionally
,his behaviour with the physically handicapped children is very rude.Many passengers
also
mentioned that numerous complaints
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raised against him,but no proper action
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taken. I would like you to take definite action on him and
also
please add
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and performance
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into consideration before allowing them on roads. looking forward
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your reply, Yours sincerely, Vikram.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Incident
  • Driver's behavior
  • Attitude
  • Passenger
  • Rude
  • Manner
  • Inappropriate
  • Unprofessional
  • Responsible
  • Safety
  • Complaint
  • Apology
  • Compensation
  • Improve
  • Customer service
  • Conduct
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