You recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter introduce yourself and say when the incident happened describe what you saw and heard say what you would like the bus company to do about it
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about the local Bus driver.
To begin
with ,I am Vikram Kallem working as a Software Engineer at Cibc Bank.Everyday
I use my own vehicle to commute to Replace the word
Every day
workplace
.Add an article
the workplace
Unfortunaley
,my car gave me trouble on 2nd Correct your spelling
Unfortunately
october
.So,I have Change the capitalization
October
choosen
Bus to commute.
The Bus driver's behaviour and his Correct your spelling
chosen
drivnig
skills made me panic .I witnessed that he missed many stops where passengers Correct your spelling
driving
has
to get down and he Wrong verb form
had
also
applied sudden brakes that made old citizens nervous.Additonally
,his behaviour with the physically handicapped children is very rude.Many passengers Correct your spelling
Additionally
also
mentioned that numerous complaints are
raised against him,but no proper action Wrong verb form
were
is
taken.
I would like you to take definite action on him and Wrong verb form
was
also
please add behavior
and performance Change the spelling
behaviour
test
into consideration before allowing them on roads.
looking forward Fix the agreement mistake
tests
for
your reply,
Yours sincerely,
Vikram.Change preposition
to
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite