You are temporarily moving to a new city for your job. You will be there for three months, and you would like to rent some accommodation for your stay. Write to an accommodation rental office. In your letter •Tell them how long you are staying •Describe the type of accommodation you would like •Explain what facilities you will need nearby
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to ask you about your accommodation. My name is Sara Zare and I am going to stay in Shiraz
city
for three months from the first of May. I need some facilities and needed, so I decided to explain them with this
letter.
In fact, I am a newcomer to Shiraz City
, I will stay here due to
my career mission, and also
, I want
to rent an apartment located in the Rephrase
also want
city
center which has one bedroom, have up-to-date bathroom with a modern music player and also
a suitable and perfect furniture Correct article usage
an also
such
as a set of stylish sofa and king size bed as well as
equipment with heating foods. I have to add, I prefer it to be located on the highest floor and has a view of the city
.
Furthermore
, I do not know how to commute to my company so I would prefer my flat to be located near the taxi station. Moreover
, it would have some cameras to observe it and be connected to the police station because my schedule work is very compact and I have to go to the office from 9 a.m. to 10 p.m. so I need extra protective ways. And also
, I rather the flat be near to restaurants rather than a fast-food store. You are not afraid of the cost, but between 4 million to 6 million per month is better.
Thank you for your help and if you need more information, you will be calling me on 083673637.
Yours faithfully,
Sara ZareSubmitted by zare.19866 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite