You have just bought a new mobile phone from a website on the Internet. When it was delivered, the phone was faulty. Write a letter to the company. In the letter: introduce yourself; explain the situation; state what action you want to be taken.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Vikram Kallem an old
shopify
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customer .I am writing
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concern regarding the shipment of the damaged Product. I
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ordered
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brand new phone from your online store to use it for
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business
purpose
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.When I received the order,the parcel
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to be fine but, when I opened it
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was a big scratch on the Screen.The phone screen is flickering when I am using it.
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, the battery is getting drained from 100
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to 2
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.I am facing a lot of
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with
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Phone . I am extremely
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disappointed
with your Device.I request you to either replace the product or compensate me
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invoiced money .I would recommend you to test the products before delivering them. I will be
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forward to your reply, Yours faithfully, Vikram.
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