You have just bought a new mobile phone from a website on the Internet. When it was delivered, the phone was faulty. Write a letter to the company. In the letter: introduce yourself; explain the situation; state what action you want to be taken.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Vikram Kallem an old

shopify

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customer .I am writing

this

letter with regret and express

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apply

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concern regarding the shipment of the damaged Product. I

orderd

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ordered

the

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brand new phone from your online store to use it for

the

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business

purpose

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.When I received the order,the parcel

seems

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to be fine but, when I opened it

their

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was a big scratch on the Screen.The phone screen is flickering when I am using it.

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, the battery is getting drained from 100

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to 2

percentage

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.I am facing a lot of

inconvenience

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with

this

Phone . I am extremely

dissappointed

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disappointed

with your Device.I request you to either replace the product or compensate me

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invoiced money .I would recommend you to test the products before delivering them. I will be

waiting

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forward to your reply, Yours faithfully, Vikram.

Submitted by vicky.kallem on Sat Oct 21 2023

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

140 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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