The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustrates the steps and tools involved in the match production process.
Overall
, it is a quite complex and lengthy procedure that encompasses a multitude of stages. In the initial stage, a revolving wood log is transformed by a peeler device, where a blade turns the log into a smooth cylinder, creating a veneer.
This
veneer is
then
further
segmented into
matchsticks
through a chopper. These sticks find their way into a
tank
filled with ammonium phosphate, ensuring they are entirely soaked. They are
then
transferred into a constantly spinning dryer drum to remove excess moisture.
This
phase of the process concludes with the dried
matchsticks
being guided through a metal duct into a hopper, which navigates them to the storage
area
. Upon reaching the storage
area
, marking the commencement of the next step, an inserter
coupled with
a
conveyer
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belt mechanism transfers the
matchsticks
into a funnel. The
matchsticks
then
land on a uniform, perforated steel belt. Here, both ends of the
matchsticks
are exposed to immersion in three separate tanks - the tip chemicals
tank
, the base chemical
tank
, and a paraffin wax
tank
.
This
triple dip ensures the matches are properly coated. Post-coating, the
matchsticks
proceed to the drying
area
, where a blower ensures they are prepped and dry for the next phase.
This
phase leads to the packaging
area
, where the matches are carefully sorted and encapsulated. The final product, a box of safety matches, is now ready for distribution.
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