The line chart shows average attendance at the cinema among various age groups in the Great Britain from 1984 to 2000.

The line graph illustrates the

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of British people who watch films separated by generations during the

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of sixteen years.

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studied, the total quantity of attendees has increased significantly and only two age groups seem to have

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attendance during the end of the

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of 1984 to around 1997

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of age group, all British people

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consumed more watch time of movies. Despite

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, British movie consumers

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15 to 24, 7 to 14 and 25 have decreased

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of the year 2000. Great Britain citizens

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35 and over that go to the cinema have slowly but steadily grown in amount as time passes, ranging from around 1 % in 1984 to just up of 10%

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2000. In spite of

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, groups formed by 15 to 24, 7 to 14 and 25 to 35 years outnumber in average consumption of big screen entertainment.