Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged in your letter, you should tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it.

Dear sir, My name is
gulshan
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Gulshan
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siddiq
who
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I
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hve
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have
been living on Al-ageeg
street
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Street
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. I would like to tell you about the damaged
road
in front of my house.
as well as
damaged the
severage
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sewerage
leverage
system
due to
heavy
strome
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occured
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occurred
from
last
month. The
road
is totally damaged and the impurities are coming out.
Therefore
, our
neighborhood
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community
disturbed
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of
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this
. I would like to suggest you please hire
the
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professional to
dismotle
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dismantle
the dislapidol
road
and reconstruct a new intensely. I think
this
is the only way. Since the
road
is fully Damaged
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merely relying on renovation is impossible. I hope to
here
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hear
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from you shortly. Yours faithfully, Gulshan siddiq.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Grievance
  • Deterioration
  • Hazardous
  • Impede
  • Inconvenience
  • Potholes
  • Cracks
  • Collapsed
  • Uneven
  • Detour
  • Repair
  • Maintenance
  • Investigation
  • Infrastructure
  • Expenditure
  • Resolution
  • Improvement
  • Community
  • Resident
  • Safety
  • Convenience
  • Traffic congestion
  • Civic
  • Enquiry
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