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What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all employees?

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In
this
 essay, I will state two main factors that contribute to
job
satisfaction
, namely
fulfillment
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 and flexibility, and explore possible reasons why
job
satisfaction
,
although
 certainly an objective for many, cannot be achieved by all. Though many companies advertise their employees as satisfied and content, it is undeniable that
this
 cannot always be the case. Few people would believe a manager saying that their factory workers are satisfied. I believe
this
 has a lot to do with the factors that determine
job
satisfaction
.
For instance
, in most cases, in order for someone to be satisfied at their
job
 there must be something for them to succeed in, be it a personal or shared goal. The factory example works perfectly: people working in a factory hardly find a purpose in what they are doing different to generating a stable monthly income. Flexibility is a second element to be taken into consideration. What is meant by
this
 is not flexible working hours, though those can certainly help too, but rather a chance to do and work on different tasks or projects and maybe even a possibility to scale them.
This
 allows for
a
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 use of different skills, or a space to learn them, and constant new stimuli. Unfortunately, many jobs do not offer
this
 kind of opportunity, resulting in repetitive and forced labour and effort. In conclusion, there are many ideas to be developed when talking about factors influencing
job
satisfaction
,
such
 as flexibility and
fulfillment
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, and if some jobs offer both, the vast majority
offers
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 neither, which makes it impossible for every employee to experience
satisfaction
 at their jobs.
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