The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given bar graph delineates the information related to the number of
hours
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that every professor
spend
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while
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teaching in three distinct schools, that are primary, lower secondary and upper secondary in the four non-identical nations,
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as
Japan
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, Spain, Iceland and The U.S.A., in 2001. Looking from an
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perspective, it is readily apparent that
teachers
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spend the highest amount of
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for
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in
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upper secondary schools in every country. 600
hours
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are invested by
teachers
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for the primary students in
Japan
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,
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however
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this
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number decreased for
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of
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in
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Iceland, which is about 550
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. Somehow, the
time
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squandered by Spanish and
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American tutors is in parallel, about 650
hours
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. The
time
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spent by the lecturers for lower secondary students is the highest among American
teacher
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teachers
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, counting for 1000
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,
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, the least
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spend
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by
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for lower secondary belongs to Ireland, only 600
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. After America,
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accounts for Spain
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followed by
Japan
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.
Teachers
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of
Japan
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spends
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about 700
hours
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in the upper secondary buildings.
Spainish
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Spanish
and Icelanders professors
spends
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almost
similar
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a similar
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amount of
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,
that is
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about 900
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. Still,
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American
teachers
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spend the highest amount of
time
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for
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in
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upper secondary,
that is
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1150
hours
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, that is".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, japan, teachers, time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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