Task 1: (Bar Chart) The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day

Task 1: (Bar Chart) The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day
The first bar chart illustrates the proportion of males and females in household chores in a country meanwhile the second chart demonstrates the
amount
of
time
each gender does housework per day. In general, females do cooking and cleaning more than males. In
house
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the house
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repairs
field
,
women
do less than
men
. In caring for pets, the
amount
of
time
spent at work by both genders is equal. The number of
women
cooking in the
house
is the highest and gets most of the
time
per day, at 85%.
Moreover
, it is greater than approximately 20 minutes compared to the percentage of
men
in
this
field
. In cleaning houses, the proportion of
women
get
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gets
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the second position which is higher than the number of
men
cleaning houses at 20%. The
amount
of
time
women
spend on
this
subject is more than 60 minutes per day and it is higher than that of
men
20 minutes. The number of each
genders
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gender
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caring for pets and the
amount
of
time
in
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apply
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both
of
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apply
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genders spend on
this
work is approximately equal, at 20%. There is a marginal difference in the first chart, it is seen in the proportion of
men
in
this
field
compared to
women
with approximately 22%. In
house
repairs, the percentage of
men
who
repairs
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repair
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in
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apply
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the
house
is almost, it is dramatically greater than
women
in
this
field
, approximately 20%.
Additionally
, the
amount
of
time
males spend on repairing houses
also
has the same trend.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, time, house, field, women, men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 4 times.

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