(Bar Chart) The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day

The first bar chart illustrates the proportion of males and females in household chores in a country meanwhile the second chart demonstrates the

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each gender does housework per day. In general, females do cooking and cleaning more than males. In

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house

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the house

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repairs

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,

women

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do less than

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. In caring for pets, the

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spent at work by both genders is equal. The number of

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cooking in the

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is the highest and gets most of the

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per day, at 85%.

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, it is greater than approximately 20 minutes compared to the percentage of

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in

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field

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. In cleaning houses, the proportion of

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get

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the second position which is higher than the number of

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cleaning houses at 20%. The

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women

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spend on

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subject is more than 60 minutes per day and it is higher than that of

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20 minutes. The number of each

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caring for pets and the

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of

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in

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both

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genders spend on

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work is approximately equal, at 20%. There is a marginal difference in the first chart, it is seen in the proportion of

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in

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field

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compared to

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with approximately 22%. In

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repairs, the percentage of

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who

repairs

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repair

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in

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the

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is almost, it is dramatically greater than

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in

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, approximately 20%.

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, the

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of

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males spend on repairing houses

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has the same trend.