You have a spare room in your apartment that you would like to rent out to a student write aletter to the student accomodation officer of local college In your letter, you should tell: Where your apartment is located When the room will be available What your requirements for a student to stay there are.

Dear sir, I would like to let you know that
i
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resaid the yanbu alageeg street house number 11.it is situated
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in ain-alnawa
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ain-alnawa
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. I have one extra room
who
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is
the rent
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to a student but now they are leaving
this
room because they are going back out hometown. Now
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am looking for another roommate if you
refere
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refer
anybody it's a great help
for
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me. I don't expect from the other person but a few things considering that i
am belong
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to
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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family
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wouldn't comfortable with
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vagitarian.
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, it would be great if the person is
non smoking
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and
not
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prohibite
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prohibited
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the
alcohel
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alcohol
. My room rent is 2000$ per month. If they are vegetarian we will be sharing the groceries and electricity bills. In case you know anybody please refer to me. Yours faithfully, Aman
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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