Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects.Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attendant to studying for qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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not a waste. Some higher education
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want to achieve
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goals at
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time
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and others want to achieve
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goal at
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time
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. In
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essay, I hope to discuss both points and
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, I would like to give my opinion. University
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have to cover a large capacity of syllabus during their learning
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. and they have to face huge exams during that
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. their aim is to pass the final exam with a higher grade and enter to
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field or get any other scholarships for the best education. To achieve those goals they have to focus on the exam and they should give more attention to their field.
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, there is great competition in the
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market. So high results student can find a
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easily and others who have high results can go to their own target.
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, all of that thing can depend on their knowledge, marks, attention, dedication and luck.
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, it becomes that, sometimes achieving
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goals at
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time
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is best now
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the increase in the demand for
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opportunities. if we have
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or three qualifications rather than our degree level, it becomes an extra chance to enter the field.
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increase
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population and economic crisis, most
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companies try to maintain their workplace with less of staff. So, there is a good opportunity for those
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.
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, learning additional subjects cannot be done by everyone, so
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talent they can manage
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or three work together in their workplace. In conclusion, everyone should learn everything. Because
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day,
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time
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it will necessary definitely. But in the university
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,
students
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are very stressed and they can't maintain their real life. So in my opinion at the University
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period
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student must attain only their own subjects without additional
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release more stress and increase the capacity of their degree.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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  • therefore
  • however
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  • even though
  • despite

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