You recently traveled by plane from London to Sydney. Write a letter to the airline company about your experience. In your letter: • Describe the purpose of your trip and when you traveled. • Explain what you liked about the flight and the airline's service. • Mention any areas where you feel improvements could be made. • Provide suggestions or recommendations for enhancing the overall travel experience. Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Vikram Kallem working as a Software Engineer , on October 23 I
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travelled from Doha to Chicago for my Client meeting
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your Flight . I am writing
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to express my experience with your Flight service.
Firstly
, I liked the recliner seats.They are very smooth and comfortable .The hospitality is appreciable.
Besides
,the Crew is proactive and polite.
Secondly
,I noticed that the Phone charging sockets are missing.It would be really
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for the passengers who are making
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journey.
Additionally
, I observed that only no-vegetarian meal is served. I recommend you
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arrange the food
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the nation ,people from
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different
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your flight .And
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, increase the cabin Crew. I look forward to your reply, Yours faithfully, Vikram.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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