You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have an acquaintance that lives there. Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter • explain your situation • say why you feel unsure about living in the city • ask some questions about life in the city

Dear Freind , I hope

this

letter finds you in good health ,we have not been connecting since 2020,When you

traveled

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to Japan.May I ask you and elaborate on my

situation

As you know the

situation

on

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in

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Sudan has been

disaster

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a disaster

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,so we have

moving

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to Saudi Arabia .

While

I

had

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searched on

website

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the website

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,I found an opportunity for a job in Japan, but I

am not feel

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do not feel

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comfort

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comfortable

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and

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or

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exciting

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excited

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to move

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about moving

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there.

This

will be

first

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the first

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time to

go

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away from my mother and family

.

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Furthermore

furthermore

;meeting peoples with different

religious

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religions

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,

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will make me quite

hesitated

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hesitant

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;the weather

always

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is always

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colds

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there And

this

is a huge problem which leave me

in

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apply

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inactive form and sleepy all the day .so these will impact on my performance and activity.

Consequently

, I want to ask you about

sociaty

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society

, How

they

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do they

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dea lwith

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deal with

the

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Muslim girls and hijab ? is it okay or there is a special

situation

.

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And

also

about communication if they speak English or just Japanese?

Moreover

apartments

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apartment

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renting

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rental

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range ;

It

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is suitable for everyone and there

is

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are

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offers for naive people or not ,

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it is safe to live alone. I asked you

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for a

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a

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for a

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lot of information so please emphasise

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apply

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with

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apply

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the

situation

and

appreciation

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appreciate

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your answer or

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response

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respond

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. Best

Redards

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Regards