You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have an acquaintance that lives there. Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter • explain your situation • say why you feel unsure about living in the city • ask some questions about life in the city

#job #move #city #acquaintance #lives #situation #questions #life

Dear Freind , I hope

this

letter finds you in good health ,we have not been connecting since 2020,When you

traveled

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to Japan.May I ask you and elaborate on my

situation

As you know the

situation

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Sudan has been

disaster

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a disaster

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,so we have

moving

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to Saudi Arabia .

While

had

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searched on

website

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the website

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,I found an opportunity for a job in Japan, but I

am not feel

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do not feel

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comfort

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comfortable

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and

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exciting

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to move

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about moving

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there.

This

will be

first

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time to

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away from my mother and family

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Furthermore

furthermore

;meeting peoples with different

religious

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religions

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will make me quite

hesitated

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In addition

;the weather

always

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colds

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there And

this

is a huge problem which leave me

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inactive form and sleepy all the day .so these will impact on my performance and activity.

Consequently

, I want to ask you about

sociaty

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society

, How

they

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dea lwith

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deal with

the

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Muslim girls and hijab ? is it okay or there is a special

situation

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And

also

about communication if they speak English or just Japanese?

Moreover

apartments

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renting

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range ;

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is suitable for everyone and there

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offers for naive people or not ,

Furthermore

it is safe to live alone. I asked you

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for a

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lot of information so please emphasise

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with

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the

situation

and

appreciation

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your answer or

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response

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respond

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. Best

Redards

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Regards

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
37Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

216 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. Do advantage of this development outweigh this disadvantages.

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