Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

Linking Words

epistle to express my opinion regarding an award opportunity which was advertised in the local newspaper. My name is Alex and I am an international student. I would like to suggest an individual who is appropriate for

this

Linking Words

award. His name is Mr. Smith, my university security guard. Probing ahead, he is a multi-task person and love to assist the native peoples recently, he helped one of my team-mate with fee and living expenses.

Although

Linking Words

he never appreciates himself after great deeds, our university students request you to nominate him for the award. From my perspective, we should give him a watch because he always wanted a wrist watch but

due to

Linking Words

a critical situation, he was not able to purchase a watch for himself. If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to contact me at 778-956-5610. Looking forward to hearing a positive response from you. Thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, Alex

shivaniphg123Mon Oct 23 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

165 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimise the bad effects?
As technology is developed, many people use computers in diverse ways and especially children spend a big amount of time to play computer games. In this essay, I will discuss what kind of negative impacts could happen and how to reduce these bad effects.
4
band
Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest?
Although most of people have a knowledge on how smoking can be harmful for their health, there is still a lot of human become the consumer of this product. This essay will explain the key reason why this trend must be together concerned and will propose the solutions a range of steps can be done to solve this matter.
7.5
band
Having babies later can have more negatives than positive effects on young adult? What is pros and cons about having babies later and how do you think?
In various fields, the question of whether to have babies later can be regarded as negative or not is worthy of debate. Some people argue that raising a child later can be more beneficial. However, in my view, having children later can provoke more negative effects, so I do not agree with the statement.
<4
band
Is it better to live in an urban or rural area? What is your opinion?
The answer to this question ultimately depends on individual preferences and lifestyle choices. Urban areas typically offer access to wide range of amenities , cultural , attractions, job opportunities and social activities.
7.5
band
In many countries it is common for parents to give their children pocket money. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this practice?
Money is necessary for living daily life either for adults or children. In some families, parents may give money to their kids and let them spend by themselves. In this essay, I will elaborate on the pros and cons of giving pocket money to young people.

Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimise the bad effects?

Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest?

Having babies later can have more negatives than positive effects on young adult? What is pros and cons about having babies later and how do you think?

Is it better to live in an urban or rural area? What is your opinion?

In many countries it is common for parents to give their children pocket money. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this practice?