You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows the different stages in the production of woolen goods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram shows the different stages in the production of woolen goods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given diagram delineates the information related to the distinct stages for the formation of items related to
wool
. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that there are eight different stages from which
wool
is passed and forms distinguish materials.
Initially
, sheep are utilized to form will, in which
the first step is
shearing or the removal of
wool
from the animal. After the
wool
is obtained, cleaning is done and the cleaned
wool
will be dried. After drying, the fabric is pinned in machinery and proper
wool
is produced.
However
, during spinning the string is removed and sent for recycling. The by-product formed is
wool
, which will be forming tufts. These tufts are stored and help in the formation of balls. These balls of yarn can be used in different practices. Some use yarn for the knitting.
However
,
this
can be used for the production of various forms of carpets
as well as
some winter jackets.
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