You learned the news from your friend regarding a part time job at a new international company near your house. Write a letter to the manager of the company in your letter, you should: Explain why you need that job give detailed suggest the time that you can work.

Dear sir, I am John residing the
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street
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am a student of web and art designing
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got
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on
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scholarship because
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belong to
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middle class
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family
therefore
,
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couldn't afford the
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. But
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didn't qualify for the scholarship in
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year . So
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am looking for
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part time
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part-time
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job. Since
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heard from my friends you have the
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vacancy
available for
part time
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job . I live nearby it will be easy for me to commute. It would be creative arts
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very
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suitable
for your company and
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would be
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help for you and your company. I can design creative
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write engaging content for your company and help to
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quality
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videos
video
. I would be able to work in the
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digital
designs
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deveision
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division
as well. Since
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have to attend
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college
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the day it would be convenient for me to work in the evening and
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at weekend
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weekend
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. I would prefer to work between 6pm to 1Am. Please
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consider
and offer the
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job opportunity. Yours sincerely, John
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