The line graph shows visit to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK resident in 1999.
The line graph illustrates the number of
residents
going abroad from the UK
and overseas residents
visiting the UK
between 1997 and 1999, while
the bar chart gives information about how many UK
residents
travelled to five of the most popular counties in 1999. Units are measured in million
Fix the agreement mistake
millions
people
.
Change preposition
of people
Overall
, there was an increase in the number of visits to and from the UK
and there were more visits abroad by the
Correct article usage
apply
UK
residents
than visit
to the Correct subject-verb agreement
visits
UK
by overseas residents
over the period given. Furthermore
, the most popular country visited was Turkey which had only about 2 million
UK
residents
going there.
The number of UK
resident
visiting overseas Fix the agreement mistake
residents
begin
at just under 15 Wrong verb form
began
million
on
1997 and rose significantly to Change preposition
in
teach
over 50 Verb problem
apply
million
in 1999. Around 10 million
overseas residents
visited the UK
in the first year before climbing steadily to just under 30 million
by the final years.
In 1999, France was visited by over 10 million
UK
residents
, followed by Spain at 9 million
. The USA and Greece had about 4 million
and 3 million
visitors respectively. The least popular country visited was Turkey which had only about 2 million
UK
residents
going there.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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