The line graph shows visit to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK resident in 1999.

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The line graph illustrates the number of

residents

going abroad from the

and overseas

residents

visiting the

between 1997 and 1999,

while

the bar chart gives information about how many

residents

travelled to five of the most popular counties in 1999. Units are measured in

million

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millions

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people

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of people

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Overall

, there was an increase in the number of visits to and from the

and there were more visits abroad by

the

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apply

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residents

than

visit

Correct subject-verb agreement

visits

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to the

by overseas

residents

over the period given.

Furthermore

, the most popular country visited was Turkey which had only about 2

million

residents

going there. The number of

resident

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residents

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visiting overseas

begin

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began

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at just under 15

million

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1997 and rose significantly to

teach

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over 50

million

in 1999. Around 10

million

overseas

residents

visited the

in the first year before climbing steadily to just under 30

million

by the final years. In 1999, France was visited by over 10

million

residents

, followed by Spain at 9

million

. The USA and Greece had about 4

million

and 3

million

visitors respectively. The least popular country visited was Turkey which had only about 2

million

residents

going there.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
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8Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

201 words

6.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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