The line graph shows the information for internet users as percentage of population in three countries from 1999 and 2009

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percentage

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of people using the

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internet

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from 1999 to 2009 in the

USA

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,

Canada

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and Mexico. All three

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have an increasing trend in

internet

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users.

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the

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and

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are slightly similar in number of people accessing the

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, it could be said that Mexico has a lower

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than two other

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. In 1999, there were about 25% of the population surfing the

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in the

USA

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, and in the same year, in

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, there were about 10%.Throughout the

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period,

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and the

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had the same

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of people accessing the

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in 2002 and 2005.

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both two

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fluctuated much between 1999 and 2009,

Canada

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ended up with a higher

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of population, which is 100%. Ultimately, in the

USA

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, in 2009, about 80% of the entire population used the

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. Different from

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two

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, Mexico only fluctuated slightly from 1999 to 2009. The country started with below 10% in 1999

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and finished up in 2009 with

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number of about 40%, which is less than the

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of the

USA

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and

Canada

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in the same year.