📌 Task 1 Your employer has recently allowed some employees to work remotely from home. You would also like to work from home. Write a letter to the HR manager for permission to work from home for the next six months. In your letter: • mention why you are writing • explain why you would like to work from home • say how this can benefit you and the company
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request permission to
work
remotely for my job.I hear you are allowing other employees to work
remotely. I would also
like to work
remotely.Because it is convenient for me, I am very busy at the moment. However
, I will try to work
remotely from home
for six months.It is very necessary for me and I have important work
to do.
Firstly
, the reason I want to work
from home
is that I cannot spend much time with my family. In addition
to this
, my monthly salary is very low. It is not enough to work
from home
. Because of these problems, I prefer to work
from home
for six months. It is very important and convenient for me.Secondly
, there is a construction going on next to our office, which I do not like because it disrupts my work
and makes me unable to concentrate.For example
, you cannot work
if someone disturbs you while
you are working. This
will have a negative effect on the development of the company
and the result of such
a company
will be lower than other companies, without a doubt.
Based on what I said above, I want to contribute to the development of this
company
. I work
more when I work
remotely at home
. There are no inconveniences.I will continue to work
in peace at home
, not only on new innovative ideas but also
on new investments.I believe that this
will certainly lead to great profits and great victories for the company
. I hope you do not mind me working from home
.You could send the above-mentioned information to my e-mail or a fax.
I look forward to hearing from you!
Yours sincerely,
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task response
The letter should be more formal in tone and focused on the specific request to work from home for six months. Clear and direct expressions are recommended.
coherence and cohesion
Improve the organization of ideas. Each paragraph should discuss a specific point related to why you would like to work from home and how it can benefit you and the company.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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