Outline the human causes of climate change. What solutions can be suggested to reduce the effects?

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It is known that humans reason for every problem there are in the world. Of course, the big problem is
climate
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the climate
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crisis because weather and
season
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seasons
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affect our
life
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lives
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such
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as growing greens. The reason for
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is people. In my opinion, people can prevent
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by changing their
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preferences
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essay will explain and outline the human causes of climate change.
First,
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human beings
use
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too much fuel
oil
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and it pollutes the
air
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too much.
air
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pollution
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affects the atmosphere
this
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changes the season. As everybody knows, if the seasons change that will global
crise
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crises
,
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this
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which
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affects grow greens and the food sector.
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, we can
use
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an electric car for transport, it is clean energy and does not
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pollution
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pollute
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the
air
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.
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, human beings can make a difference by buying electric
cars
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. Some people think that
cars
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does
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not do pollute
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air
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the air
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too much,
others
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while others
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do not. There is the reality that maybe there are billions of
cars
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in the world and most of them
use
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fuel
oil
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,
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this
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is a reality, we can not say,
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cars
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that cars
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do not affect
air
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pollution
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.
second,
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most countries produce electricity from crude
oil
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and we
use
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it in homes, factories and all in street lights.
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factories consume it too much. We can solution
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,
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, governments can let the factories produce their
electric
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but solar and wind energy.
İn
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In
that case, our
air
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can stay clean. Because, when producing
electric
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it makes
pollution
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air
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to
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too
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much.
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,there is a reality that human beings are affected by the
pollution
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of
air
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too much. They do it by using
cars
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which
use
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fuel
oil
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and produce
electric
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from crude
oil
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. We can solution for two problems.
İn
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In
my opinion, we can
use
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nuclear energy to produce electricity and we
use
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it for
cars
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, homes and everywhere. İt is clean and economical. but some
persons
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people
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think that it is so dangerous, I do not agree
to
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them because if you make it correctly does not
dengerate
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generate
denigrate
it.
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