You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: •explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months • say how your work could be done while you are away • ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to you in a request to move me to the head office of the company. My reasons for saying so are mentioned below: I have been working in

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company for the

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3 years and learnt a lot under the supervision of my seniors and especially in your kind guidance .

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, I learnt a lot here but now, I want to explore my

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on a bigger scale for

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purpose, I have to

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on bigger projects which are handled by the head office employees. One of my good friends is already working in the main office and he told me that they are about to start

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on a very big project and they are preparing relentlessly for

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task and I

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eagerly want to

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with them to explore more about my job. Now, I am hoping to get a positive response from you and will be very thankful to you. Yours sincerely, Ramisha.

ramisha.ejaz23Mon Oct 23 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

172 words

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