The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the
exports's
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exports
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earnings of a nation in different classes from 2015 to 2016.
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that, within each
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the
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in the percentage of commodities sent out of the country in 2016
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to the year 2015
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also
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been depicted in a table.
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, there was an upward trend
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in the export values in 2016 for almost all the categories compared to 2015. Petroleum and engineered products brought the most income contrarily to the agricultural goods and
textlies
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textiles
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, the percentage
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for the former was not
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significant as it was for the latter. The gems and
jewellery's
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jewellery
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export
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exports
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witnessed a fall in 2016 and for the
textiles
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textiles,
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the
percnetage
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percentage
change
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was the highest. In detail,
the
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petroleum's profit was 61
billion
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dollars
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in 2015 which increased slightly by 3% in 2016 reaching
63billion
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63 billion
dollars
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.
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, the engineered goods rose by 8.5% from 57 to 61
billion
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dollars
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.
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, the gems and jewellery earned 43
billion
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dolllars
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dollars
in 2015 which declined by 5.18% falling to 41
billion
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dollars
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. With a 0.18% rise, the agricultural products gains were more or less similar around 31
billions
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dollars
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in both years. Textiles saw the most dramatic
change
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with
15.24
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a 15.24
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% incline from 26 to 31
billion
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dollars
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words change, billion, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • economic sector
  • percentage change
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • trend analysis
  • year-on-year comparison
  • significant growth/decline
  • stagnation
  • market dynamics
  • fiscal repercussions
  • trade balance
  • competitive advantage
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