The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the differences in Happy Valley Shopping Center between 1982 and 2012.
Overall
, it is clear that
the mall has expanded in total thanks to the expansion and moving of a
furniture retail and a parking lot Remove the article
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coupled with
the deforestation of some areas.
To begin
with, it is noticeable that the lake has been replaced with a newly introduced part of the mall, Furniture Retail. Just the
south of that, we can see a parking lot being replaced with a green space Correct article usage
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in addition
to the entrance path removal.
Focusing on the interior of the shopping centre, Electronic and Sports shops have been moved from the western side to the right in front of the Elevator. In replacement, the area is dedicated to Themed Restaurants. Moreover
, a Coffee Shop was newly built in the year 2012.Submitted by bita.rezaei7052 on
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