The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The map illustrates the main changes
have
taken place in the town of Stokeford between the time period of 1930 and 2010.
Correct pronoun usage
that have
Overall
, the town has been modernized. A farmland and forest park have been knocked down and some new homes have been introduced.
Linking Words
To begin
, there were several major changes have occurred on the east of the way. A farmland and forest park have been removed and Linking Words
been built
a golf course and tennis course inner the same area. Verb problem
apply
Additionally
, Linking Words
beside
the hotel Change preposition
apply
has been
constructed a car park for Wrong verb form
is
Add an article
the customer
a customer
customer
. The number of houses Fix the agreement mistake
customers
have
increased.
Change the verb form
has
Secondly
, on the south of the road has been added some new things. On the sea has been erected a fishing port and a couple of boats. The fish markets have been replaced by five modern apartments. Linking Words
However
, the cafe remained as it was. On the west of the way has been paved over from the main road and Linking Words
been
attached new two housesUnnecessary verb
apply
.
The shop has been converted into Add a missing verb
have.
Correct article usage
a restaurants
restaurants
.Fix the agreement mistake
restaurant
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