The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagrams below illustrate the value of exports in different categories

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their shift during 2015 and 2016 in one particular country. Based on the chart, earnings made by exporting petroleum merchandise contributed the most to the national export revenues, in both 2015 and 2016,

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that of engineered goods reached nearly the same amount of earnings in 2016.

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, the income from exporting textiles and agriculture took up the smallest portion of the total export account.

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the table, it is indicated that the total value of exporting textiles skyrocketed in 2016, increasing 15.24% compared to 2015. In the meantime a significant rise in exporting petroleum commodities and engineered goods could

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be seen, 3% and 8.5% respectively.

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, the income made by exporting agricultural products remained stable, experiencing a slight increase of 0.81%.

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, that of exporting gems and jewellery in 2016 heavily plunged, which was 5.18% lower than in 2015. After analysing the graphs it is obvious that the values of exporting petroleum products accounted for the highest ratio of total exporting earnings in both 2015 and 2016,

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that of textiles rose most dramatically in 2016 in comparison to 2015.

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