The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
A glance at a line graph provided reveals the data of
emission
sent out into the air in the UK from 3 different sources namely industry, transport, and household and their total, counted in million Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
tonne
, from 1990 to 2005. Change to a plural noun
tonnes
Overall
, almost all data experienced a downward trend except for transport’s
pollutants.
In terms of the total air contaminants, starting at exactly 7 Change noun form
transport
in
the beginning of the period, it observed a continuous dive to 4 after 9 years before deteriorating slightly by 1 Change the preposition
at
in
the end year. With respect to wasted gas from industry, despite releasing the most significant amount of contaminated gas, there is a vigorous and dramatic drop to precisely 3 in 1996, followed by a continuous and slow decline of roughly 3 over the next 9 years. With regard to emissions from transport and those of households, Change preposition
at
although
exhausted fumes from transport and those from households have the same starting point, they have different growth patterns. While
the former increased only slightly to precisely 1, the latter decreased by 0 between 1990 and 2005.Submitted by hominhtrang995 on
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