The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates the conversion of a particular public garden between 1920 and now.
According to
the plan, it is obvious that the place has been converted to become more suitable for visitors and meet their demands. The Glasshouse has been demolished.
Moreover
, the fountain and the Pond for water plants is integrated to become the Water feature at the bottom right corner, and the three half-circle-shaped Rose garden and four separate Seats are moved to the centre, becoming a rectangular Rose garden and rows of Seats surrounding it. Except
this
, an Amphitheatre for concerts replaces the previous Stage for musicians. A Café and A Children’s play area have been constructed at the old site of the pond.
Besides
, an entrance to the underground car park is added on the right side of the square, near the water creature.
In addition
to
this
, the two entrances facing Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street are being kept the same.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alterations
  • renovations
  • modernize
  • upgraded
  • transformed
  • landscaping
  • facilities
  • amenities
  • preservation
  • heritage
  • green spaces
  • eco-friendly
  • public space
  • community impact
  • historical elements
  • conservation
  • recreational areas
  • urban planning
  • sustainable development
  • layout
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