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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the destination of anthropology
students
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 from one particular university after finishing their undergraduate study
as well as
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 their salaries after 5 years of work.
According to
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 the chart, it is obvious the largest portion of
graduates
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 chose to work full-time. Based on the table it can be seen that after working 5 years, the wage of most
students
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 exceeded 100000
dollars
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. Of all the anthropology
graduates
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 in the educational institution, over half of them (52%) received a full-time job, which was considerably more than the
students
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 working part-time. There was
also
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 a relatively large proportion of
graduates
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 finding themselves unemployed after graduating from
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. In comparison, among all the choices listed, the least chosen was working part-time and taking postgraduate study at the same time. Only 5% of the
students
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 selected
this
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 path. As for the salaries of Anthropology
graduates
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 in that educational institution, of all the
students
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 opting to be freelance consultants, 80 per cent of them attained more than 75
thousand
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dollars
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 as their wage after 5 years of job. The figure was even higher for
graduates
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 working in the government sector, which reached 50 per cent.
In contrast
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, 35% of graduate
graduates
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 working in private companies received salaries of between 50
thousand
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 and 75
thousand
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dollars
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, slightly more than
students
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 getting more than 100
thousand
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dollars
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 (30%).
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