The chart below shows the percentage of difference in income between men and women from 1978 to 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of difference in income between men and women from 1978 to 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates statistics concerning how income between men and women is different in percentage in five countries over a 30-year period.
Overall
, the percentage of
difference
decreased over the whole period in all countries, except Australia. It can be seen that Japan experienced the most
difference
in income between the
twogenders
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two genders
, with the level falling by ten per
cent
to 40 per
cent
in 2008.
Although
the US and the UK started at various initial percentages of
difference
, accounting for about 34 per
cent
and under 30 per
cent
respectively in 1978, there was a similar three-decade slight decrease for both nations,
thus
reaching 26 per
cent
in 2008. Both Australia and France,
on the other hand
, witnessed a similar number of differences, representing 20 per
cent
in 1978, followed by a two-decade fall. After 1998,
while
the percentage of
difference
in France continued to fall to around 18 per
cent
, Australia had experienced the only immense increase to above 20 per
cent
by 2008.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words difference, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.

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