The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What problems can this create. What are the solution

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more and more older

people

need to rival with the younger community to get the same jobs.

Although

there are some seemingly unavoidable

complication

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complications

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of

this

trend, they could be addressed by the

goverment

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government

by taking proper

actions

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. The population are

increase

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dramatically so unemployment is the hardest issue

for

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all over the world,

specially

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in

the

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populous country.

Therefore

,

younger

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the younger

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generation

use

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their capacity to find jobs

whereas

the

elder

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older

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ones are old and do not have creation or

flexible

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are flexible

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in

works

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.

As a result

, the younger generation

are

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gradually eliminated the older ones.

Moreover

, day by day technology can be seen as a part of

human’s

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life and the younger who approach it

from

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soon can use it easily

and

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that

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is an advance for

the

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teenagers.

Consequently

, the pension of the retired

people

and the salary of the older

people

can be cut down and paid for the technology

However

, certain actions can be

teken

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taken

to tackle the problem above.

Firstly

, the

goverment

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government

should have more

policy

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policies

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for the old community

such

as

increase

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increasing

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the amount of pension or

give

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giving

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them

the

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social insurance.

Goverment

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Government

can make some donations or charity so that the

life

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lives

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of

the

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older

people

can be

more

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better.

In addition

, depending on consumption and customers

so that

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some companies request their workers to work overtime and it

have

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a big impact on their workers’ health. And the only way to solve the problem is

reduce

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to reduce

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time for work. In conclusion,

however

threatening the issues are, they can be resolved or, at least, lessened by taking all the necessary steps to mitigate the issues