The charts below show the percentage of Australian men and women in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014.

The charts below show the percentage of Australian men and women in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014.
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The bar charts illustrate statistics concerning how many male and female individuals in
percentage
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were employed in Australia in three distinct
age
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categories.
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, employers presented a high tendency to recruit people between the ages of 35 and 44 in all years.   Regarding the
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group between 35 and 44, it was the most commonplace
age
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of recruitment in Australia, remaining stable at around 98 per
cent
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,  the highest
percentage
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in all three years. In 1984, the
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of
men
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between the ages of 15 and 19 represented the second-highest number, accounting for over 50 per
cent
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of employed
men
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.
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, there was a low tendency to employ the oldest
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group, between 60-64, in 1984, with the level starting at under half of employed
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.   Both the youngest and oldest
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groups had witnessed  stability by 2001, as the
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of both groups continued at a similar level in 1984. In 2014,
while
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the
percentage
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of
men
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between 15 and 19 decreased slightly to 50 per
cent
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, the
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of the oldest employed
men
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increased drastically by nine per
cent
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to 55 per
cent
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.
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, over time, it seemed that older
men
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were likely to be hired.
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