The charts below show the percentage of Australian men and women in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014.
The bar charts illustrate statistics concerning how many male and female individuals in
percentage
were employed in Australia in three distinct age
categories. Overall
, employers presented a high tendency to recruit people between the ages of 35 and 44 in all years.
Regarding the age
group between 35 and 44, it was the most commonplace age
of recruitment in Australia, remaining stable at around 98 per cent
, the highest percentage
in all three years. In 1984, the percentage
of men
between the ages of 15 and 19 represented the second-highest number, accounting for over 50 per cent
of employed men
. However
, there was a low tendency to employ the oldest age
group, between 60-64, in 1984, with the level starting at under half of employed men
.
Both the youngest and oldest age
groups had witnessed stability by 2001, as the percentage
of both groups continued at a similar level in 1984. In 2014, while
the percentage
of men
between 15 and 19 decreased slightly to 50 per cent
, the percentage
of the oldest employed men
increased drastically by nine per cent
to 55 per cent
. In other words
, over time, it seemed that older men
were likely to be hired.Submitted by ali.m.mohammdianb on
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