The charts below show the percentage of Australian men and women in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014.

The charts below show the percentage of Australian men and women in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014.
The bar charts illustrate statistics concerning how many male and female individuals in
percentage
were employed in Australia in three distinct
age
categories.
Overall
, employers presented a high tendency to recruit people between the ages of 35 and 44 in all years.   Regarding the
age
group between 35 and 44, it was the most commonplace
age
of recruitment in Australia, remaining stable at around 98 per
cent
,  the highest
percentage
in all three years. In 1984, the
percentage
of
men
between the ages of 15 and 19 represented the second-highest number, accounting for over 50 per
cent
of employed
men
.
However
, there was a low tendency to employ the oldest
age
group, between 60-64, in 1984, with the level starting at under half of employed
men
.   Both the youngest and oldest
age
groups had witnessed  stability by 2001, as the
percentage
of both groups continued at a similar level in 1984. In 2014,
while
the
percentage
of
men
between 15 and 19 decreased slightly to 50 per
cent
, the
percentage
of the oldest employed
men
increased drastically by nine per
cent
to 55 per
cent
.
In other words
, over time, it seemed that older
men
were likely to be hired.
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