Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A number of individuals argue that high
school
graduates have to travel or obtain an occupation for a period of time rather than going directly to study
at university. From my viewpoint, It can lead to a
positive development Correct article usage
apply
such
as broadening horizons and enhancing your personal growth earlier. However
, there are also
the
drawbacks, Correct article usage
apply
such
as delay
in getting a formal education, and Fix the agreement mistake
delays
risk
of losing academic motivation.
Correct article usage
the risk
To begin
with, taking
Correct your spelling
making
decision
to Add an article
the decision
a decision
work
after graduated
from high Wrong verb form
graduating
school
is not a terrible decision
. If you have decided to take the occupation since graduating from high school
, you will be exposed to the professional field. Therefore
, it can broaden your horizons especially
in the workplace field. Add the comma(s)
, especially
Moreover
, since you have been getting older, it can build your personal growth such
as being confident to confront challenges and surviving independently. For instance
, my friend decided to take the job after graduated
from high Change the form of the verb
graduating
school
. Then
, currently
she has more Add a comma
currently,
work
experience than me. After she can survive by
her own money, she Change preposition
with
decided
to continue her Wrong verb form
decides
study
again with her own money.
Fix the agreement mistake
studies
However
, there are also
drawbacks if you decide to delay your study
. Firstly
, your formal education will be delayed. For instance
, you can finish your study
Fix the agreement mistake
studies
in
a Change preposition
with
Bachelor
degree or diploma Change noun form
Bachelor's
in
Change preposition
at
the
age Correct article usage
an
that is
not should be
. Unnecessary verb
apply
In addition
, if you have enjoyed your work
, your academic motivation tends to be lower because you have so many tasks in your work
. As an illustration, there are some people who did not finish their studies because of their business in their office.
To sum up
, both the decision
of taking
the occupation first after graduating from high Change preposition
to take
school
and delaying your study
to higher education have
positive and negative sides. Change the verb form
has
Therefore
, you have to consider it carefully before making the decision
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