Task one, you have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after six years old child. Write a letter to the parent,in your letter Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.
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Dear Mr John,
I am writing
this
letter to you to discuss the advertisement that you have posted recently in the Times newspaper. I might be qualified for this
opportunity.
This
source of work would help me in numerous ways. Firstly
, I am a student of early
childcare stream and Correct article usage
the early
currnetly
doing my final semester. Correct your spelling
currently
Therefore
, taking care of six years old child is one of the possibility
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possibilities
to
me to learn more about a child. Change preposition
for
Secondly
, as you know I am an international student, I would like to stay in touch with the australian
family so that I will able to nourish my Change the capitalization
Australian
foreigen
language.
I would like to Correct your spelling
foreign
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mention
mentioned
that I have one year of experience Wrong verb form
mention
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apply
of
handling infants. Apart from my Change preposition
apply
study
, I used to work as a part-time caretaker in a kindergarten school. I left that job due Fix the agreement mistake
studies
my
in-person classes.
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to my
On the other hand
, I love to spend my leiure
time in a garden with children. I am living alone here far from my family, Correct your spelling
leisure
thus
I have got a lot of free time to do some work.
I look forword
to a positive response.
Yours Correct your spelling
forward
sincerelly
,
Harpreet Kaur.Correct your spelling
sincerely
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,