Task one, you have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after six years old child. Write a letter to the parent,in your letter Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

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Dear Mr John, I am writing

this

letter to you to discuss the advertisement that you have posted recently in the Times newspaper. I might be qualified for

this

opportunity.

This

source of work would help me in numerous ways.

Firstly

, I am a student of

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childcare stream and

currnetly

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currently

doing my final semester.

Therefore

, taking care of six years old child is one of the

possibility

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me to learn more about a child.

Secondly

, as you know I am an international student, I would like to stay in touch with the

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family so that I will able to nourish my

foreigen

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foreign

language. I would like to

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mentioned

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that I have one year of experience

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handling infants. Apart from my

study

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, I used to work as a part-time caretaker in a kindergarten school. I left that job due

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in-person classes.

On the other hand

, I love to spend my

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leisure

time in a garden with children. I am living alone here far from my family,

thus

I have got a lot of free time to do some work. I look

forword

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forward

to a positive response. Yours

sincerelly

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sincerely

, Harpreet Kaur.

Submitted by harpreet291kaur on Wed Oct 25 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

194 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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