Task one, you have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after six years old child. Write a letter to the parent,in your letter Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

Dear Mr John, I am writing
this
letter to you to discuss the advertisement that you have posted recently in the Times newspaper. I might be qualified for
this
opportunity.
This
source of work would help me in numerous ways.
Firstly
, I am a student of
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childcare stream and
currnetly
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currently
doing my final semester.
Therefore
, taking care of six years old child is one of the
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to
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me to learn more about a child.
Secondly
, as you know I am an international student, I would like to stay in touch with the
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family so that I will able to nourish my
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foreign
language. I would like to
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that I have one year of experience
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of
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handling infants. Apart from my
study
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, I used to work as a part-time caretaker in a kindergarten school. I left that job due
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in-person classes.
On the other hand
, I love to spend my
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leisure
time in a garden with children. I am living alone here far from my family,
thus
I have got a lot of free time to do some work. I look
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forward
to a positive response. Yours
sincerelly
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sincerely
, Harpreet Kaur.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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