The diagrams below show changes that have taken place in the Sawry District neighbourhood since 1920. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given maps depict the Sawry District complex’s condition in 1920

along with

its transformation in 2022 after several contractions.

Overall

, the development did not only take place in urban

area

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,

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but

also

in some natural places.

To begin

with, the main feature of the construction happened in the top left corner of the area. In

this

area

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Telubug Bros Cannery disappeared, and a new Office Complex was built. Across the road from the Yang Office Complex, there was a new petrol station which used to be a primary school back in 1920.

Moreover

, three apartments and a shop were built

near by

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the Oak Avenue Road and the number of houses were reduced from six to five buildings. The most noticeable construction that has taken the

nature

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place was the establishment of Prestwich

primary

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School. The development took over more than

a

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half of the woods next to the lake.

Besides

, a walking patch from the housing to the river and a bike path were added next to the river.

Finally

, a bridge was built on the Elmwood River.