The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

#show #migration #uk #information #features #comparisons

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The above two pie charts demonstrate the factors that England immigrants and

emmigrants

Correct your spelling

immigrants

emigrants

considered in 2007. The % that those factors constituted enables us to observe the corresponding mobility patterns. Interestingly, definite

job

Fix the agreement mistake

jobs

show examples

played

the

Correct article usage

show examples

major role in both immigration and emigration decisions, sharing

similar

Correct article usage

a similar

show examples

proportion among the two categories.

Nonetheless

Linking Words

, variation showed on the bottom of the list: people entered Britain

wihtout

Correct your spelling

without

stating any reason was least possible in 2007;

whereas

Linking Words

, only 4% of emigrants left Britain for

further

Linking Words

study, making it the lowest out of all. Summarizing from the charts, a phenomenon stands out which definite job was the dominating consideration in 2007 England's mobility. At the same time, the UK's educational institutions attracted both

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

local citizens and foreign students, making it the second top reason for immigration and the least considered for emigration.

Submitted by ardentpicks on Wed Oct 25 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

▼

Introduction: The introduction is missing.

▼

Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.

▼

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

▼

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

▼

Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

▼

3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

137 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4.5
band
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Write at least 250 words. Examine the arguments in favour and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue. You should use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
In the world of technology and medicine, animal experiments have become a norm. It is an important practice before any finalization of a drug or any other practical experiment. Although, it is beneficial to test any new drug on animals before human, also, it is inhuman and dangerous for animal's life. This easy will discuss both the points and present a conclusion on the issue.
7
band
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Modern society is characterised by an abundance of choices, whether in the marketplace, the media or even in personal lives. While some people embrace this diversity, others feel overwhelmed by these choices. From my perspective, I believe that in modern days, we have too many options to choose from, and that can often lead to confusion, anxiety, and indecisiveness.
6
band
TASK 2 (Academic and General Training) You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved? Write at least 250 words.
Talking about health issues, one cannot avoid looking at the alarming increase in numbers of people having difficulty maintaining a healthy balanced diet. In fact, its reasons are multiple and certainly, the solutions to accompany them are various as well. We will be taking a glance at them below.
7.5
band
Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everthing organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?
Many people believe that keeping their houses and workstations clean and in order is of extreme importance. I completely agree that having a tidy environment is important because it brings mental benefits to individuals and increases their productivity.
7
band
Schooling is no more necessary, since more and more information are accessible on the Internet, and student can study just as well at home. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the function of formal education can be substituted by several educational contents that are easily attainable on free websites. I strongly disagree with the statement eliminating the roles of school and this essay will outline the two most significant reasons.

The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

TASK 2 (Academic and General Training) You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved? Write at least 250 words.

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everthing organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Schooling is no more necessary, since more and more information are accessible on the Internet, and student can study just as well at home. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?