You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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I am writing a letter to complain regarding
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facilities in Wahdat College. When I moved to
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, my
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is too dirty when I return from work because my roommate scatters all his clothes and towels on the bed.
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, he does not do his duty to clean the
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do the place tidy every time.
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, I cannot sleep well with him because he has a snoring problem so it's disturbing. When I talked about
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issue, he misbehaved with me and used abusive language. I think it's unethical to use un inappropriate words with anyone. I am requesting you to please arrange a separate
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for me. I like to live in a peaceful atmosphere.
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, living with another boy has no problem with snoring so it will be easier to live with him. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully,
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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